Agnik Biswas

Well expressed and good choice of words.Rhyming could have been better but still it's good. Other than these, it is a masterpiece. I would really enjoy if this was a ...

I would also suggest splitting it into stanzas. Your metaphors are incredibly organized but they should be a bit more suggestive. Overall , it's a masterpiece 😊.

I would also suggest splitting it into stanzas. Your metaphors are incredibly organized but they should be a bit more suggestive. Overall , it's a masterpiece 😊.

I would also suggest splitting it into stanzas. Your metaphors are incredibly organized but they should be a bit more suggestive. Overall , it's a masterpiece 😊.

I would also suggest splitting it into stanzas. Your metaphors are incredibly organized but they should be a bit more suggestive. Overall , it's a masterpiece 😊.